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Ohyoupokedmr

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Ohyoupokedmr last won the day on August 18 2015

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About Ohyoupokedmr

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    Duke
  • Birthday 03/07/1998

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  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    Minnesota
  • Interests
    Piano, writing stories, sometimes poetry, Jesus Christ, my girlfriend.
  • Species
    Wolf

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  1. Ohyoupokedmr

    How to do a Court scene.

    I need help producing a court scene. One of the characters in my fanfiction is being tried for war crimes against humanity... But I have no idea how the court process works in detail, and how judges act in courts, how lawyers act, how the scenes are set up, what dialogue they should have... If there is anyone who is familiar with the criminal court system, please, I need your help.
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    Undertale

    I am obsessed with Undertale. So much so that I'm writing a fanfiction on it. So yeah.
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    Rating Music

    Very interesting song. A nice and different mixture of instruments. I kept getting different vibes as the song continued. The singer has a very calm voice to me. Overall good song, would listen to more of his stuff :3 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WOBay3G4aQU
  4. Ohyoupokedmr

    Music VS Poetry

    No, I don't actually.
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    Music VS Poetry

    That is one of the many reasons I love Twenty One Pilots and Switchfoot so much; they make their music more than just music with some lyrics. They make it poetic with metaphors, symbolism, etc. They use several forms of poetry to convey meaning, rather than just using similes throughout the entire song. They combine metaphors, symbolism, similes, personification, such and such, to make a true piece of art.
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    My works need critique.

    I posted this in the wrong section.
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    Music VS Poetry

    a lot of today's music to be more focused on sounding good... Made to appeal, or tell stories. While that's good and all, I find that most, if not all of mainstream music, isn't poetry anymore. Poetry is something that takes and requires thought, both by the maker and by the listener. Poetry isn't afraid to use words that the viewers don't understand yet, because poetry is meant to sound professional and... Well... Poetic. Music, although is supposed to be a sub-form of poetry, now days doesn't apply by these standards. Common, even taboo swear words, are used to formulate songs for the sake of sounding good. They are so focused on making about their "feelings and experiences" that they lose track on what makes poetry. Without standards of art, we lose track of what is good art and bad art. If the lyrics is bad or of poor taste, we ignore the lyrics and just listen to the music, not the words or the message; that should NEVER happen if it is good poetry. Sad thing is, nobody cares if the music is trying to tell them things that is against their values (many Christians are okay with music that have morally bad lyrics). When will we begin to appreciate songs for their poetic value only rather than what is good for our ear buds?
  8. Ohyoupokedmr

    My works need critique.

    I have been typing a few stories up. Three to be exact and one on standby. I would like to tell you about a few of them. I am working on two fanfictions and one original work. I am also thinking about another fanficion and another original work. One fanfiction is part one of a series called, “Clarkâ€. It is a minecraft fanfiction series that gives minecraft a more realist view on the universe and give history and backstory to everything all the way up to Minecraft’s original hero, Steve. I plan on making this a three or four part series. The second one I am working on is based on the game, “Heroes of the Storm†and it is called, “Lords of the Nexusâ€. It is basically detailing the history of the leaders of each realm that the heroes fight in. It is compiled of short stories and small chapters in between. Both are a work in progress. Now, my best work, I believe, is my original work; Pangaea. There is a lot of description here so bear with me: Essentially, the backstory is that in the year 2015, all of Earth's continents shifted and came together in a seventy two hour process called the "Merging Period" or simply the "Merge". During the Merge, almost all of the world's cities and towns were leveled by major earthquakes and tsunamis. Millions upon millions died. After the Merging Period, humanity was in ruins and society was crumbling. Anarchy took hold soon after. Tribes began to form in order to keep humanity from killing themselves, however, these tribes were ruled by dictators and warlords, most only bent on domination and power. Several major nations arose five years later, after the fighting between all the tribes halted and nations began to form: The Imperium: five years after constant tribal warfare, several tribes decided that they had enough, and began to start their own government. This began The Imperial Pact, a pact which brought together five of Europe's biggest tribes and form one nation: The Gabriel Collective, The Maalrik Empire, The Utani Congregative, and two other tribes, who's names are forgotten. From these five tribes, a king was elected, and the leader of The Maalrik Empire, Riley Maalrik, was chosen as king. King Riley Maalrik reigns to this very day. He was a force to be feared and respected across Pangaea, capturing most of former Europe and Middle East from dictators and expanding territory. The Imperium was the first organized government to appear on Pangaea. The New World Order: After the rise of The Imperium, many others attempted to do the same thing across Pangaea, with mixed results. However, one successful group of tribes in former America created The New World Order, an order dedicated to preserving the ways of democracy. Whole laws were rewritten, and almost the entire old American government was reintroduced, with an executive branch, legislative branch, and judicial branch. King Maalrik saw the NWO as a threat to his so-far perfect society, and the two are currently at war. The Krro'Gaathians: After the Merge, anthromorphic beings found their way to Earth through, as they claim, portals and wormholes. Nobody knows for sure how they got here, what caused them to get here, and what can be done to get them out, but most anthros were rather peaceful, but there were many bent only on conquest. One such tribe is known as the Krro'Gaathians, or to anthros, Krro'Gaath's Crusade. The Crusade was founded by Warlord Krro'Gaath, a well known and well feared warlord of the anthro world before they found Earth. Krro'Gaath knew that on his own world, supplies and availability for future anthromorphic generations were diminishing quickly, and his tribe would soon fall. However, when Krro'Gaath found Earth, he planned on complete conquest for the anthro race and his dying tribe. There was hope for the Krro'Gaathians. Krro'Gaath thought it was the right for anthros to rule Earth and rule humans due to racial superiority. Krro'Gaath thought them weak and subordinate, unworthy to rule any empire. Therefore, Krro'Gaath set out to conquer Earth for his people and for his race. The Mystics: The Merge caught the attention of a group of otherworldy beings known as the Mystics. These beings came to Earth for, as far as the humans know, three reasons: to investigate what caused the Merge to happen, to banish the anthros back to their world, and to fight their ancient foe who also appeared on Pangaea, the Dark Mystics. Not much is known other than that, but they are said to follow a nameless being who they only refer to as, "Our Master". The Mystics are capable of seemingly metaphysical powers and abilities, which is said is how they came to Earth: through teleportation. The Dark Mystics: The Dark Mystics snuck onto Earth like a beast in the shadows. Nobody knew how they got to Earth or why they are here, but they are the fallen brothers of the Mystics who also follow a dark being, known as "The Inmorte". They wish to summon The Inmorte onto Earth for reasons unknown. The Sadist Guild: The Krro'Gaathians weren't the only major anthro race to come to Earth. Another race of anthros, known as The Sadist Guild, also squirmed their way here. They are easily the most hated nation on Pangaea and worlds beyond. Psycopathic, greedy, and ruthless, this Guild uses a method of mass abduction on villages and towns, killing military members and capturing civilians. After the civilians are captured, they are brought back to their hidden fortress, where it is said that they torture and enslave them. After months of torture, or as they would put it, "discipline", they are sold off to small tribes for profit as slaves. They are the number one cause for human and anthro trafficking on Pangaea. These stories are my pride and joy. God gave me the ability to write and inscribe stories I imagine down and have others enjoy them too. However, I am often switching back and forth between stories. If anyone can offer their services to proofread my original work or my second fanfiction, just tell me and I will share it with you. Thanks!
  9. Ohyoupokedmr

    Rating Music

    This is to get people to spread each others taste in music. Basically, all ya need to do is share a song through youtube, and the person below responds with some things they liked about it and some they didnt. Then that person posts their own song. Try not to do too well known songs and please keep them appropriote according to the rules. Ill start http://youtu.be/gSjUrc4ZEJs
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    Tomo Draws Things

    I'm too young ;-; I haz nu monnies!
  11. Ohyoupokedmr

    meet the me!

    Greets! I'm new too! Let's be new together!
  12. Ohyoupokedmr

    Its POKEDME

    Thanks! I used to go to Furs For Christ, but a lot of their political views didn't sit well with me, being a conservative and all. If it were more balanced I would have stayed but it was an overwhelming majority seemingly on the opposite specteum of the political scale. I got in trouble a few times for my passionate arguments. So I thought being in a new place that may hold similar or more people with views like mine would help me stay away from releasing anger toward politics. I mainly stopped associating with the fandom because of the common practice of sexual deiviancy and simple access to things like pornography.
  13. Ohyoupokedmr

    Favorite Genres and Artists?

    My favorite band has to be Twenty One Pilots. Have Christian band members and God used their poetic lyrics to save me from committing suicide. I hold the utmost respect for them and there isn't a single song I don't like. Example song: http://youtu.be/fQFBYp4jJQ8 My favorite official Christian band is Switchfoot.
  14. Ohyoupokedmr

    Its POKEDME

    My username is a typo. It is supposed to be Ohyoupokedme. Anyway, hi, I'm new. For a few months I kinda stopped associating with the fandom... I decoded to give another "christian" fur forum a shot. So here I am.
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