Ember
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Oh no problem. I enjoyed editing it, and you can compare with your other editor and see what they think. It doesn't bother me. I hadn't written for a while. Well... I wish you luck with your book.
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Eagle and the Quest for Truth: Somewhere on a small island in the middle of the Quanatic Ocean, there sat a young boy by the name of Eagle who was on the beach staring out at the ocean and watching the waves roll in. Then S'Drassa, his sweet heart, came up to him. In a hurried tone she reported, "Eagle! come on the elder wants to see you!" Looking up from his gaze he looked at the girl that stood before him with (description) hair and beautiful (description) eyes. "hello?" Came her sweet voice slightly raised, "did you hear me?" Eagle turned his face back to the shore and responded in a irritated voice, "why me? All he ever asked me to do is fetch things for him. Why can't he do it him self?" Shaking her head she knelt beside him, "Eagle... I know how you feel, but he IS the elder here. And you know what they say happens if you don't do what he says." Eagle rolled his eyes, "yeah-yeah. The gods curse you for it." S'Drassa stood back up, "So? Get going! Do you really want that to happen?" She then leaned in closely to his ear and whispered, "and besides once you do, me and you will go down to the falls and..." Suddenly a small boy with (description) (somthing that stands out like hair, clothing or fur) comes running down to them and interrupted them, "Eagle! Come quick! The elder wants to see you!" Not finishing what she was saying due to the boy being there she urged him as well, "come on Eagle... get a move on." Standing to his feet he reluctantly turned to go, "alright then, I'm going. I'll see ya later." "by Eagle." S'Drassa waved. As Eagle began to leave the couple winked each other as he went down to see the village elder.
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If I take my time (I am not a professional) but I write stories, I can make an example for you using what you have here. I'll show you what I come up with later if you wish.
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I read what you've got there so far and I am wondering, are you going for a dialog type story? Or are you going for a story book type? What you have here is a dialog, excellent for plays, dramas, or rp but not that good for a type of storybook. However the content is good.
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True but it is not all that useful for making fur.... Sadly. I did not see anything for making fur, at least not for how I am doing it...
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My luck at Anime style
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Your welcome I enjoyed the challenge
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*Peeks around corner* sorry I'm late... Just wanted to say hi.... Soooo.... Hi.... *goes back into hiding*
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That gave me and my hubby a good laugh at 3:40 this morning it was cool
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I was going to start blacksmithing but i set up a small forge on the edge of a beach and when i came back the next day some teens or children had come through and utterly destroyed the small forge and scattered all my metal that i had collected across the beach (and no the waves didn't get it, it was too high up the beach) good job on the rose, however, i am a knife person myself
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Very nice, i can't say i am that good yet i mostly do full face butterflies when i do myself. (my church sometimes gets me to do facepainting for their church picnics)
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I took you up on the offer to colour it and here is what i came up with
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I think it is adorable.
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i am actually doing that to make mine. i used a metal frame while using yarn to keep it in place and then i am making a "skin" of fabric and after that i am going to try to make a "fur" out of yarn by attaching it using hookrugging then brushing it out and attaching it to the "skin"
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Wow, looks pretty sweet
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Thanks if you notice his wings are actually transparent.
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my frost dragon and a cool effect from my frost dragon i hope you like them.
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Blackstone, what did you make that head out of?
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the frame for my headpeice is finally here, now i have to work on stage 2... right side left side front
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can't say that i have....
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That's adorable! I've actually wanted to make an image of our future Cubs and your image is spot on what I was thinking!
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sounds interesting but i dont know how well that would work in the tropics where you simply step out of your airconditioned room and you begin to sweat...
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i make yarn tails, i made my own and a friends and working on another friends. i like using (i think it is 5 ply yarn) very soft and i brush it out beforehand(and it is easy to brush). it takes me about a day to complete. i am currently working on my own fursuit as well. i am using hookrugging to make the fur of my fursuit... (im only making a partial because my fursona wears clothing and where i am going it is HOT (philippine tropics). i have my own thread that i am showing off my progress which i will be updating very soon.
