Jim Floyd

Portal 2. It has such fun storyline, and I haven't used any walkthough or guide on the campaign yet

Shine On! Pulse

Holy cow! *jaw drops* I give this a 9/10. This is truly a work of art, and I think you should be very well pleased, instead of discouraged about it. You clearly captured gods almighty stature and power. I have a few questions: What type of drawing tablet did you use, and how long did this work of art take?

I can help point out simple errors in your story (which there are a few). Later tonight, I'll try to find time to send a message with highlighted mistakes. Great job on the story so far

This is one of my favorite Pink Floyd songs/music videos:Welcome to the Machine (just to warn you, this has disturbing images) Welcome to the Machine

This is very, VERY good. The cliffhanger makes me eager for the next page!

What I liked most about both of your poems was the imagery. It wasn't hard picturing what was going on in them, and the similes weren't bad. The birds cry in the night (is that the title?) was cool. Not many poems I read contain fighting scenes, blood, and devilish grins . This wasn't really a critique, because I'm no good at that; it was more of a compliment

:-/ Who just removed their own posts? I'm sorry that I haven't replied in time due to some other things in life. SO to whoever it was, I liked the heavy use of metaphors (it stood out to me the most)- especially the one with the potter and mold. And I liked your critique too. It made me realize how much I need to refine my poetry over, and over again and to not rush them. I also decided to pull up two Haikus that I've done in the past... Vagrant Vagrant rank on street. Fetid rat, or blameless child? Watchful eyes of shame. Christmas Tree Jungle of color, Music for opening eyes. Strangely calming.

I know. It just seemed like that at first, but that just makes it feel even more weird so I'll just drop it :\ btw, they all call their owners "dad" and "mom". OK, time to drop it.

You guys sure weren't kidding. This is a really fun comic, which had me hooked from the start! The only problem I had with it, was that Peanut and Grape are (a tiny bit) in love... which I find strange because they were in a brother/sister situation. But strangeness aside, it's still fun to read

Hi, and welcome. I'm new too *thumbs up* Well, I believe we can be intimate (or draw pictures of it) in many other less-mature ways, such as snuggling, kissing, and my favorite, glomping. This is just a friendly suggestion, and btw, I like your picture.

YYYYYYEEEEEEEES PLZ That is basically what I meant :/

The idea here is just to show off your poetry skills or give constructive criticism to others. It can be any form of poetry you like, hiakus (if I spelled it right), music, freeform, whatever is the most fun Here's a couple of mine... The few, the proud. True leaders of our day. Are sought after by robbers, Who seek to tear them down. Watch your words, thoughts, and deeds. And all your secret devious things. For one day in the future, To god we'll have to plead.

*gives car oil stained hug* There , oh wait... sorry. Better use soap on that Carson. I'm still having a hard time working up enough courage to post on other threads D8 It's a sort of newbie problem.

You probably don't want to hug me because I have engine oil all over me for the moment (been busy with the car) :blush: Ah, heck with it *filthy hug* I'm glad there's gamers on here too!, and I'll add u all shortly.