Adagio† 0 Report post Posted September 24, 2012 A Random poem I wrote and finished. Life: A twisty road... Where are we going? Do we even know? Does the road even lead anywhere? Sometimes we go to fast... Sometimes; not fast enough... Sometimes we get lost in te curves, Sometimes, someone endures it whith you Most of the time, we're completely alone... What's waiting for us at the end? In the end does it matter? Have we all mindlessly follwed the mainstream, for something we don't even want? Will the end justify the pain it took to get there? Will it all be for nothing? Do we really want to be nothing? Do we truly endure this treturous road alone? One small bump could take you forever, one shortcut could cost eternity... We often find ourself cold and alone, We often find ourself a long way from home... But, are we always alone....? Who watched you come to life? Who watched you grow up? Who created you in just one night? Who was there when no one else? Who was there when you could not sleep? Who always listerns to your problems Who gives you solutions! Friends and family is a comfort.. But NONE come close to Yahweh's love... NONE will exist whithout his power! When the end of the road lingers close, You better hope your story's right The Creator knows your truth, The Creator knows the light! When your end is in sight, Is it the destination you hoped for? Is it where you wanted to be? Or is it another pitstop That lasted eternity... to clarify 1) Yahweh is GOD's real name, in the King James bible it's wrongly translated from the Hebrew יהוה or YHWH 2) I'm not a Jehovah's witness... Tell me what you think.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fahn† 0 Report post Posted September 24, 2012 Roses are blue, Violets are red, I have to go to the bathroom. *devours poem* -Patrick Star Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
leopard97† 0 Report post Posted September 24, 2012 Roses are blue' date=' Violets are red, I have to go to the bathroom. *devours poem* [/i'] -Patrick Star I say this all the time espescily when I try to get my brother to laugh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adagio† 0 Report post Posted September 24, 2012 A few things-- Watch your and grammar... please explain this... I probably wouldn't pose so many questions' date=' but assert what I believe the narrator holds as the answer.[/quote'] I do not fully understandstand what you ment here.... You just need to do some pruning. I do agree... I am rather new to this.... and still do need practice, all I know is what I learn in school... THANX FOR THE FEEDBACK! Roses are blue, Violets are red, I have to go to the bathroom. *devours poem* -Patrick Star I'm not alloud to watch cartoons, but I'm pretty shure thats a quote from spongebob? Also, Could annyone give me a few pointers, I'd like to know what I do right, what I do wrong. Like Foxbunny... Tnx in advance! Also,Please understand that English is not my mother toung.... Ek's 'n Afrikaans spreukende Boerseun.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
