Tawny_Screech† 0 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Some of you may or may not know that I write...a lot. Well people keep telling me to post my stories whenever I send them off. I finally caved, kicked paranoia in the shins and went for it. The story is a Space Opera featuring Mystery, Action, Science Fiction, Angst, Loss, Drama, and well...its a long list okay! The link is to DeviantArt and requires you to log in, as I put up the maturity warning due to the gore/death, and brief non-descriptive nudity. The first chapter runs roughly 12 pages long and I just posted the second one up, which is comparable in length. Honestly I don't know if they're any good at all. But if you want to kill some time I would really appreciate it. Thanks, Sincerely Tawny_Screech. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Carson Coyote† 0 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 I read the first chapter when you first posted it, and I'll read the second one tomorrow, since it's getting kinda late right now. I thought the first chapter was pretty good, so I'm looking forward to the rest! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Var† 0 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 I'm looking forward to it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tawny_Screech† 0 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 I'm not sure how good it is. I keep second guessing every part of it, thinking of ways I could have done this or that...I don't know. Seriously comments, constructive criticism, boiling oil. All are welcome. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Voltomere 0 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 I really liked the first chapter. I have not read the second one yet but when I get a chance I definitely will. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Flechmen 0 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Could ya post a link to your profile? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Carson Coyote† 0 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Oh, Tawny, I forgot to mention that I can be your "Grammar Nazi" if you'd like. I was going to offer earlier, but then I got sick. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tawny_Screech† 0 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 Ironically the link is disguised as 'link' above but here it is posted for ease. http://tawnyscreech.deviantart.com/ Grammar Nazi? The only reason I hesitate is because I have a friend who does that for me normally and I can call him up and bug him basically whenever. And that works with my erratic and often crazed writing style. I can send the copies after he cleans them to see if there are anymore improvements to be made if you'd like. ^^ (On an off-note the narrative kinda shifts as I switch from character to character. People think differently than others, which is notable in the second chapter, and I'd like to know if it worked or not. I felt like it was a big step and maybe a wrong one...) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
