MattCoyote† 0 Report post Posted October 30, 2011 As the last of the of the day falls, The deep purple maw of the night swallows the wood. My breath freezes as it leaves my lips, The pale snow etching at your mind As the sounds commence upon me. The soft pads of the lynx crunch through the powder, The claw of the wolf clicks against the solid creek. And the howl shatters the night. My eyes burst open, The eyes of the forest stare at me, Petrified, Silent, upon the ground, My soul shakes and shudders. Waiting for the warm dawn to rescue me. I had to write this for Lit. class- my friends liked it so I figured I'd post it here Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JuliaWolf† 0 Report post Posted October 30, 2011 I like it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Carson Coyote† 0 Report post Posted October 30, 2011 Love it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MattCoyote† 0 Report post Posted October 30, 2011 Thanks guys! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sakiki† 0 Report post Posted October 31, 2011 nice reminds me a bit of a poem I wrote before Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Galantine Knight Misticore† 0 Report post Posted October 31, 2011 awesome poem like the imagery Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
