Tyger the Tigerwolf† 0 Report post Posted April 21, 2012 It came just like they said. The Earth started to burn. Everywhere in front of me i saw it. The fire rained from the sky. And land burned and was no more. Existence was purged from histories record. Every building, every automobile, every plant, even the air turned to ash as the fire burned everything it touched. I stood on the hill watching the fire which was burning purple came closer to me. I could see the land turn flat as it too burned. And i feared this not. I knew it was coming. My soul spoke nothing to me. My flesh did not make me want to run and hide like a fool fleeing from the coming judgement. I was going back from where i came. The cast out, the rejected, the feared, the son of the Alpha wolf was coming home. And the evil that had cast me out fear my return. They killed my parents and tried to kill me before i was born. Then when they failed i was thrown away to this world that i grew to love. And now they burn it to kill me. But i will not burn. The fire will not kill me. I wrath will be swift and final. i will take back what is mine by birth and i will leave no survivors of the evil they make for my kind. (what cha think?) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Wolfin Report post Posted April 21, 2012 o.O Dark.... disturbing... not my thing so I won't try and write more than that. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tyger the Tigerwolf† 0 Report post Posted April 21, 2012 lol well.. kinda just hit me. i kind of see it as a movie trailer. i have so many stories tha start like this in my head. mostly i keep them in there for my own enjoyment. but i was thinking of a wolf having to watch his world die. the one he grew up in all because of him. dont you think that would be dark? nyoof Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MinervaMunk 0 Report post Posted April 21, 2012 That was cool to read. It's pretty different from the other stuff you like to post. I wouldn't have expected you to make such a serious piece. This would make a nice excerpt for the back of a book, right above the summary. Nice job Tyger ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Carter CatFox† 0 Report post Posted April 21, 2012 Don't play with matches, kids! Nice job, makes me feel better if 12/21/12 is real o.O Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tyger the Tigerwolf† 0 Report post Posted April 22, 2012 thank you. i also juggle... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pooty_BlaDiBla 0 Report post Posted April 23, 2012 Don't play with matches' date=' kids! Nice job, makes me feel better if 12/21/12 is real o.O [/quote'] you want it to happen? are you ok? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tyger the Tigerwolf† 0 Report post Posted April 24, 2012 I will get the marshmallows!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JuliaWolf† 0 Report post Posted June 3, 2012 Very good Tyger! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites