Kain7507† 0 Report post Posted June 14, 2011 Here's more of my story... Hope you enjoy Oh and please don't steal this as your own idea or sell it without out my knowing about and all that Riff raff naddy pack Cold Steel.doc Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Galantine Knight Misticore† 0 Report post Posted June 14, 2011 I've read several pages so far, very nicely done but I get a little bit lost when it comes to when the main character is expressing an emotion about something, its like a half first person without revealing his whole thought on a certain matter was this intentional? Cause if it is, then It seems fine with me Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Carson Coyote† 0 Report post Posted June 26, 2011 Just got to read the latest, and I still love it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
riddle kat† 0 Report post Posted June 27, 2011 i like it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
