Ziggy† 0 Report post Posted September 1, 2010 I haven't been writing in a long time now, mainly because it's summer and I wanted a break. Well now I'm graduated from High School and taking classes here at home so I should have more time at night and on weekends to write. Could you guys critique my writings and see if I should keep at it? TGA: Ch1 TGA: Ch2 I stopped a quarter through chapter 3 because of school and then summer drowned me. Short Story Poem I have a few more stuff uploaded on my page. Check them out too if you like these. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VC_Wolffe† 0 Report post Posted September 2, 2010 I am reading through them right now. Well, first i would work on you hook for 'The Gems of Ailon'. That's all for now. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
