Dreyvik† 0 Report post Posted May 2, 2010 I'll start with the one I wrote today, please let me know what you think! Did you know that I still dream about you? Kisses with no passion Me pretending to be something I'm not For your sake I whisper in the wind and wish that you could hear the gentle echo Of my voice, saying that I miss you, But also that I am happy for you, My heart smiles when I think of you, free And me no longer lying to myself Such simple dreams, dreams that are lucid beyond comprehension They connect two lives that are worlds apart from eachother Old paths that only the lunar glow illuminates It is as though I could hold your hand, but What is the point of holding hands with an illusion with your face It smiles then fades in the starry sky The gentle music begins to play And it feels, my love, like we are in the epilogue of our story A goodbye, and tears that are not born of grief They never happened, but deep within my soul I know that on the whims of a fair daydream I can lie to myself with a simple thought and paint the picture so clearly Your effigy makes me smile A profound smile Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chess123mate† 0 Report post Posted May 8, 2010 Nice imagery/sensory details! Not confident that I'm understanding its meaning, though... a description of a loveless romance? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
