Fieuline Tabby† 0 Report post Posted March 21, 2010 (edited) = Edited June 28, 2013 by John Smith Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chess123mate† 0 Report post Posted March 27, 2010 I think if you added that last stanza there, it would clear up what you're trying to say. The theme would come across quite well then Although strong in negative imagery (yuck!) it's a very good poem. Well done! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
