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#1 JosiahTiger

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Posted 28 November 2014 - 09:44 PM

since there isn't much activity on the music forum, I thought i'd share this and get some opinions on it. The bad recording was on purpose.

 

This is the first thing I recorded from piano. I imagine my opus's, particularly, to turn out more ambient and calm like Dustin Ohallorans are.

 

https://soundcloud.c...o_delic7/opus-1


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#2 Thomas Maltuin

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Posted 29 November 2014 - 02:13 AM

Josiah I like it. I would however like more contrast so the body of the song doesn't sound like an arpeggio exercise. @3:20the presentation changes significantly in a good way but perhaps you could try a similar shift through the body while maintaining the same chord structure. Keep it up buddy :)

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