That's ok, if you can draw the shapes, then I can easily build form with shading to give it a better look, sometimes line work is messy, but the color tends to help a lot, are you good with an ink pen?
I'll let you be the judge Here's a link to my gallery on FA.
Besides, Quin hasn't actually responded to my post yet xD
I like your art, but it's bit to cartoony for what I'm looking for
Well hold on now..... every comic starts out rough and u cant expect someone to give you quality like rick griffen, recommend taking whatever u can get
plus i can work with his style its nice