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#1 MattCoyote

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Posted 18 October 2011 - 01:36 AM

This is my first female character that I have drawn, actually one of the first altogether.

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#2 Fahn

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Posted 18 October 2011 - 02:15 AM

Hehehe, reminds me a lot of some of my first anthro drawings ^_____^

I think if you made the hair longer, it would give more of an impression of being female. That's just my opinion, of course.

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Posted 30 October 2011 - 11:21 PM

Fahn, I lengthened the hair like you said and added color using GIMP. What do you think?

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#4 riddle kat

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Posted 30 October 2011 - 11:55 PM

add textures
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Posted 03 November 2011 - 12:17 AM

Well, it is far from awful, but it could use some improvement. Tell me, do you start out with the basic shapes? A circle for the head, and such? I think you might benefit from planning out the drawing more. I have included a helpful tutorial, as I think you may benefit from it as I did.
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Posted 05 November 2011 - 10:12 PM

Well, it is far from awful, but it could use some improvement. Tell me, do you start out with the basic shapes? A circle for the head, and such? I think you might benefit from planning out the drawing more. I have included a helpful tutorial, as I think you may benefit from it as I did.
http://sadpanda.us/i...041-LINYGBD.jpg


Well I did start with a circle, but your right, I didn't really plan out the drawing. Thank you for the link, the tutorial looks like it will definitely be helpful.
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Posted 14 December 2011 - 12:00 AM

Not bad, practice is the best means of improving your art.
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#8 Fahn

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Posted 14 December 2011 - 12:19 AM

Fahn, I lengthened the hair like you said and added color using GIMP. What do you think?


A great improvement! It's a lot easier to tell it's female and the color makes it look 10X better.




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